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Last Tuesday we watched President Obama's address to students all around the country.  In response to his motivational words, we wrote letters about our goals and lives.  See a few letters posted below.  Please leave comments:
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watching Obama's live speech to schools on September 8, 2009
  9/8/09

Dear Mr. Obama,

Today I heard your speech on education and I really got inspired!  Now I’m in the 6th grade and I think it’s time I start getting more serious about my schoolwork.  In 6th grade I have been improving my vocabulary.  For example, I think you are an eloquent speaker.  That was one new word I learned from my vocabulary.  I think you are a great role model and I really like how you talk and communicate with people, also the way you reach out to us kids.  Wow! I don’t think there has ever been a president that has ever dedicated their time talking to students.  I thank you for that!

I believe education is important because when I grow up I want to be a CSI.  That means Crime Scene Investigator.  But for me to do that, that means that I have to study real hard because when I want to check the body or get the paw prints I have to use science.  And if I want to get into a person’s bank account I need to use math for that.  Also, not just that but I really want to be successful.  But like you said being successful takes a lot of hard work, so I have to work extra hard. 

In your speech you mentioned the importance of being responsible and one good example I have is my cousin Laura.  She is my role model right now.  She goes to Cal, and she is studying biology.  She is going to graduate this May, with her bachelor’s degree.  Her parents don’t help her do well in school.  They don’t encourage her, in fact they do the opposite.  They say, “Why do you go to school so much!”  It hurts me when they say that.  She struggles a lot with her schoolwork.  She lives all the way in Vacaville and goes all the way to Berkeley every day.  And she doesn’t have that much money.  They kicked her out of the dorm rooms because she couldn’t afford it, and her parents don’t give her money either.  She has to work to extra jobs to afford gas.  But what I love about her is that she does whatever she has to do to be successful.  She really wants a good education, so she goes for it no matter how hard it is.  She really wants it!

I need to show responsibility too.  One goal I have is to turn in my homework everyday no matter how hard it is!  The steps for that are write down my homework and to have it with me.  Another goal is I want it to be a bigger person.  I want to help the kids that grew up with out a mom or a dad.  I’m going to try to go to their shelter and read them a story.  Also, I hope I can think of something else and try to do that as well.

Today during your speech something that really caught my attention during your speech was the part when you said, “People succeeded because they understood that you can’t let your failures define you, you have to let your failures teach you.”  That part of your speech really motivated me. 

Also right now we are having a lot of problems with the economy.  I hope you can try to fix that Mr. Obama because right now none of my family has a lot of money.  I think that  we should do something about it quick before more people loose more houses and jobs.  It hurts me that when I walk by the streets I see a lot of people selling flowers with their kids and their kids have no shoes.  That’s what breaks my heart.  Poor kids with their little tiny feet all crushed and cut.  I really want to help them like maybe buy them some shoes or clothes.  You should make a donation for those kinds of families.  Well Mr. Obama, keep up the good work and have a nice afternoon.

With all my heart,

Samantha XXXXX.

P.S.:  Can you please write back to me?  I know you’re busy and all but please that would mean a lot to me!  But if you don’t write back that’s okay I understand.  Just in case you do write back here is my address:  XXXXXXXXXX

 

9/8/09

Dear President Obama,

I believe education is important because with out it you will spend the rest of your life poor, with no life, and maybe even wrecking up your body with drugs and other bad things.  With education you will pass in life, get a job, have a house, and have a nice family.

In order to get a good education you have to show personal responsibility.  One example of a person who has shown personal responsibility is my brother Umar.  He has ran two marathons and is planning to do two more.  He did one in his freshmen year and one in his sophomore year.  Umar is focused on his homework and gets it done even though he has a ton of it every single day.

One goal I have to show personal responsibility for is to read all the Harry Potter books made.  I started to read the first one not too long ago and to read all of them I need to study hard and read more on my free time and at school.  It may be tough, kind of like marathons, but if I put my head to it I can do anything.

This morning you said, “J.K. Rowling’s –who wrote Harry Potter- her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published.”  Those words influenced me greatly in my goal of reading the Harry Potter books, and in real life. Now in anything when I fail I’m going to try 12 more times before I completely give in to what I’m trying to do.

From:

A muslim 10-year old boy named Sayyid Ali XXXXXX

 

 

9/8/09

Dear Mr. Obama,

Hi.  I’m a student at ASCEND school and I do think education is important.  I believe education is important because when we grow up we want to have a good job so you can get money.  Education will help me achieve my goals because I want to be a singer and actress, but what an agent told me was that I need to have good grades and work hard because if I don’t I can’t be any of these.  Look, a director won’t ever hire a girl with such a bad education he needs a smart girl with a good education. 

When you mentioned responsibility someone just popped out of my head.  It was my sister because she has a baby girl and she’s only 17 years old.  Instead of dropping out of school she keeps going to school and it’s difficult because of all these things she’s doing.  Also, she’s working really hard so sometimes I have to get home and help her with my baby niece.  Sometimes I just want to to tell her how responsible I think she is, but I’m always too afraid. 

I will try my best to know all my multiplications because I only know some of them and I’m getting tired of everyone knowing all of them but I’m the only one that doesn’t.

Steps to achieve my goal:

1.     Turn off TV

2.     Tell my mom when she gets off work to help me.

3.     Get flash cards and start making them.

Another goal I have is I want to study after every test because I got a D in my first test and that motivates me to study to get all B’s and A’s. 

Steps to achieve my goal:

1.     Turn off TV

2.     Go to a quiet place (in the house)

3.     Start to study!

There was one thing that you said that actually touched me a and that was, “The future of America depends on you!”  I don’t know but something about it makes me feel…”special.”  I know what you are thinking, “Oh this little kid really think she’s special!”  But somehow I do because what ever you do involves your country in it.  Also if you have a good education America would be proud and you should too because you’re helping America just by that one little thing.

I believe that the challenges of middle school would get harder and we can’t give up because if we do you might just end up probably in the streets.  Also not just that but you might hang out with the wrong people.  One big problem that I’m scared of is going to college.  I don’t know but I’m scared because I feel like if I’m not going to get accepted no where.  Also I’m scared about thinking about dropping out. I don’t even want to think about dropping out because I want to graduate.  But I won’t because if I have fantastic grades I won’t need to be scared of anything.  One thing I can do is to not give up!  That will help the world because my kids will see I tried hard and when they have kids they’ll see she tried hard, and it keeps going on after generation through generation.

Sincerely,

Estrella XXXXX

P.S.  You’re the best president!

 

9/8/09

Dear Barack Obama,

I am a student at ASCEND school in Oakland, California.  My name is Jesse XXXXXX and I want you to read this letter and give me a response to my response to your address to American students.  I believe education is very important to everyone because we can come up with ideas for more energy efficiency.   I also think we can break the Guinness book of world records of the most fuel efficient car that goes 105 miles per gallon, and solar power cars that recharge the battery and makes the wheels move.

I can show responsibility by taking charge of my own learning and going to get my Phd.  The academic goal I want to achieve is to pass everything there is about learning and make energy efficient technology.  I also want to make a good way to make less waste in our environment.  This is true and I also want this to be real so we can stop global warming. 

The words you spoke made me feel encouraged and want to do better and better in school.  The words that convinced me to do that were, “You’ll need the knowledge and problem-solving skills you learn in science and math to cure diseases like cancer and AIDS, and to develop new energy technologies and protect our environment.”

In the future as we all grow, the struggles I believe the world will face is that the ocean will over flow because ice is melting in all the places that are supposed to be cold.   I also believe that more animals will be gone from the face of the earth if we don’t change our ways.  I want this adventurous and amazing planet to stay forever. 

Sincerely,

Jesse XXXXXX

9/16/2009 03:09:55 pm

Dear Jesse, Estrella, Sayyid,and Samantha,

I am really impressed by how carefully you listened to President Obama and how thoughtfully you responded to his message about education. You all expressed your own ideas so clearly and eloquently.

Good luck with your studies. I am very confident you will succeed in school and in life!

Sincerely,
Amy Gottesfeld

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Ms.Makhija
9/16/2009 04:31:27 pm

Dear 6th grade students,

I found your letters to President Obama honest, thoughtful, and very interesting. You listened to what he had to say and did a wonderful job at reflecting on his words. Thank you for sharing some of your writing.

Good luck with the rest of 6th grade.

Ms.Makhija

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Mrs. Dianne Stauffer
9/17/2009 03:15:03 pm

Dear Samantha, Jesse, Estrela and Sayyid,

I was really impressed by how well you wrote your letters to President Obama; you had a lot to say and expressed those thoughts perfectly.

Congratulations and I wish you and your classmates great success. Keep up the good work in your class and always move forward.

Mrs. Stauffer

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Rebecca
9/18/2009 05:38:19 am

Wow! I am so impressed with each of your strong writing skills. Your letters are very descriptive and persuasive.

It also makes me so proud to hear what amazing goals and dreams each of you have.

Thank you for your letters. Keep writing more blog posts! You are all gifted authors with important thoughts to share.

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Maureen Abramoski
9/18/2009 12:02:51 pm

Dear Jesse, Estrella, Sayyid and Samantha,
Ms. Smith tells me you are in sixth grade but your letters and reponses to the president's speech seem way beyond that grade level. You really listened to what he said and processed it in a meaningful way. You cited specific things he said, I loved that - great writing! and it really makes your point so relevant. You all expressed such wonderful dreams and goals. Can't wait to read more...........Maureen A.

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Mike Browning
9/18/2009 04:25:58 pm

Some people have the opinion that kids today are not serious about their education. These people should read your letters to President Obama. Your letters are well composed, insightful and show a desire to improve oneself. In short, you are winners! Keep that determination to improve and excell.

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Lori Kasle
9/23/2009 06:03:25 am

Thank you for sharing these thoughtful, heartfelt, eloquent letters. I really enjoyed reading about the positive models who are influencing your lives and hearing about your personal goals to reach your own dreams!

Keep us posted with more writing!

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Cathy Taruskin
9/28/2009 01:02:00 pm

Hello 6th graders!
Reading your letters to President Obama made my day. I work with undergraduate admissions at UC Berkeley, and I can't tell you how often high school seniors who apply to Berkeley write essays that sound something like this: "I wish I had known earlier how important it was to develop good study habits and work hard for good grades. I didn't really figure this out until I was a junior, and then my grades started getting a lot better -- I wish you didn't have to look at my earlier grades..." etc., etc. It was great to hear in your letters to the president that you already understand this -- that you realize there's a connection between what you want to be when you grow up and what you do today to move in that direction. Keep it up!

Some of the examples of role models you gave, like Samantha's cousin Laura, are inspirations to all of us. Even though Laura doesn't get much encouragement from her family, she does not use that as an excuse for not setting high goals for herself -- and she's going to have a college degree soon!

Just know that there are a lot of people you've never met who are interested in your progress, rooting for you and really, really want you to succeed. You are the future!!

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Joseph
2/22/2012 07:54:06 am

Hello 6th graders,
I'm in 7th grade now and I can tell you its a lot harder than 6th grade. It also takes a while to get use to everything to. In short, keep up the good work!

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